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I think most dust come from China.
China is very powerfuler country than my country.
So my country's government doesn't ask to solve about dust's problem.
I hope my country has power in the world in time soon.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
I know the problem of the yellow and fine dust coming from China is worsening so I hope the new administration could do something to decrease if not totally solve the problem.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I think most dust come from China.
>> correct!
China is very powerfuler country than my country.
>> China is more powerful than my country.
So my country\'s government doesn\'t ask to solve about dust\'s problem.
>> So my country\'s government doesn\'t ask them to solve the dust problem.
I hope my country has power in the world in time soon.
>> I hope my country will have power in the world very soon.
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