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I don't like play the game but if I play the game someone, I want to play it with somone less me because it is just fun.
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Hello Ms. [이름]!
I think you should try playing games even sometimes, so that you can relax and go back to your youthful soul. ^^ It\'s really fun and motivating.
So I suggest you try one. ^^
~Teacher Rain~
I don\'t like play the game but if I play the game someone, I want to play it with somone less me because it is just fun.
>> I don\'t like playing games, but if I play a game with someone, I want to play with someone less skillful than me, because I think it will be fun!
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