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This question is interesting.
I want to have an extra $200 a day.
Because if I have an extra 2 hours a day, I have to work in my office for an extra 2 hours a day.
Most Korean supervisor are very bad.
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Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
If I\'ll have to choose, I\'ll choose the money too.(\",)
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
This question is interesting.
>> correct!
I want to have an extra $200 a day.
>> correct!
Because if I have an extra 2 hours a day, I have to work in my office for an extra 2 hours a day.
>> correct!
OR>> If I have an extra 2 hours a day, I will have to work for two more hours.
Most Korean supervisors are very bad.
>> correct!
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