5-7th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

I think your long holiday was great.
I\'m really glad to know that.

Fireworks are really romantic and beautiful.

I hope you\'re having a great Monday.

See you tomorrow.^_^
~Teacher C[이름]

The first week of October was totally a holiday week.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The first week of October was really a holiday week.
It\'s because there is a big holiday for Koreans in the week.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s because there is a big holiday for Koreans this week.
Before going to my parents house, we traveled another city.
>> Before going to my parents\' house, we traveled to another city.
It was Andong which is very famous for the traditional village and the mask festival.
>> It was Andong which is very famous for its traditional village and its mask festival.
We participated in the traditional Korean mask festival and we watched the mask play.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We participated in the traditional Korean mask festival and watched the mask play.
It was very interesting but the most thing was the fireworks.
>> It was very interesting but the most interesting part was the fireworks display.
The fireworks is different from the modern fireworks.
>> The fireworks were different from the modern fireworks.
The biggest difference is the direction of the fireworks.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The direction of the fireworks was the biggest difference.
The modern thing works forward the sky but the traditional fireworks works downward.
>> The modern fireworks go up into the sky but the traditional fireworks go downward.
So, it was very slow but it was a very romantic scene.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> As a result, it was very slow but it was a very romantic scene.
The modern fireworks loudly sounds but Korean fireworks was very very soft and quiet.
>> The modern fireworks have loud sounds but the Korean fireworks are very very soft and quiet.
To work The Korean fireworks suspends the short tube that composed with the traditional paper and the charcoal repeatedly in the long rope.
>> [Do you mean]: For the Korean fireworks to work, they are suspended in a short tube which are made of traditional paper and charcoal that are alternately placed in a long rope.
The rope also suspends at the high position crossover the river.
>> The rope also suspends at a high position which crossover the river.
When it works, the flame reflect on the river.
>> When it works, the flame reflects on the river.