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I think that school is learn to social skill. But also it is make citizen workers.
Schools are used to discover individual capabilities, but they are also used to create a country\'s workforce.
So it is important to teacher’s work.
Teacher can lead student good way, so teacher is important.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think that school is learn to social skill.
>>> I think, school is the place where we learn social skills.
OR>>> I think, school is the place where we learn to socialize.
But also it is make citizen workers.
>>> However, it also prepares the citizens to be employees someday.
Schools are used to discover individual capabilities, but they are also used to create a country\'s workforce.
Schools are used to discover individual capabilities, but they are also used to create a country\'s workforce.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
So it is important to teacher’s work.
>>> So teacher\'s job is very important.
Teacher can lead student good way, so teacher is important.
Teacher can lead student good way, so teacher is important.
>>> Teachers could lead students in a good way, so teachers are important.
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