5.8 Homework

2014-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning! It rains here in Korea today. Rain makes me a little feel melancholy. Homework What is the best way to protect a person's health? I think the best way to protect a person's health is trying to be think positive and optimistic. Eating a healthy food is important. I take a Vitamin and Omega-3 every morning.I always eat multigrain rice, too. Good foods,happy ideas and appropriate exercises are very important for our health. I always strive to keep these three jobs. Thank you!

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Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework early today. Anyway, it is really important to be healthy always. So always take care of your halth so you can enjoy life to the fullest. Take care! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! >> Correct. It rains here in Korea today. >> It is raining here today. Rain makes me a little feel melancholy.>> The rain makes me feel a little melancholic.HomeworkWhat is the best way to protect a person\'s health?I think the best way to protect a person\'s health is trying to be think positive and optimistic. >>I think the best way to protect a person\'s health is by trying to think positively.   Eating a healthy food is important. >> Correct. I take a Vitamin and Omega-3 every morning. >> Correct. I always eat multigrain rice, too. >> Correct.Good foods, happy ideas and appropriate exercises are very important for our health. >> Correct.I always strive to keep these three jobs. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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