5.8 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It was very nice to talk with you this morning. Thank you very much!
What is the most important thing that we need to teach children? Why?
I think that honest is the most important thing that we need to teach children and keeping a promise is important, too. According to my experiences so far, these two are very important things in our lives. I always keep these in my mind when I teach my kids.
Thank you! Have a great weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]!
I had a great time talking with you also this morning. Thank you for the energy and passion that you are showing in our class. Have a wonderful weekend too.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
It was very nice to talk with you this morning.
>> I had a very nice talk with you this morning.
Thank you very much!
>> Correct.What is the most important thing that we need to teach children? Why?I think that honest is the most important thing that we need to teach children and keeping a promise is important, too.
>> I think that honesty and keep a promise are the most important values that we need to teach children.
According to my experiences so far, these two are very important things in our lives.
>> Correct.
>> or: According to my experiences so far, these two are very important values that we should carry on in our lives.
I always keep these in my mind when I teach my kids.
>> Correct.Thank you! Have a great weekend!
>> Correct.
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