5.8 Homework

2015-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It was very nice to talk with you this morning. Thank you very much! What is the most important thing that we need to teach children? Why? I think that honest is the most important thing that we need to teach children and keeping a promise is important, too. According to my experiences so far, these two are very important things in our lives. I always keep these in my mind when I teach my kids. Thank you! Have a great weekend!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]! I had a great time talking with you also this morning. Thank you for the energy and passion that you are showing in our class. Have a wonderful weekend too.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. It was very nice to talk with you this morning. >> I had a very nice talk with you this morning. Thank you very much! >> Correct.What is the most important thing that we need to teach children? Why?I think that honest is the most important thing that we need to teach children and keeping a promise is important, too. >> I think that honesty and keep a promise are the most important values that we need to teach children. According to my experiences so far, these two are very important things in our lives. >> Correct. >> or: According to my experiences so far, these two are very important values that we should carry on in our lives. I always keep these in my mind when I teach my kids. >> Correct.Thank you! Have a great weekend! >> Correct.

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