5/8 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?]
I think that the education of school has a standard criterion for general students.
However, every student has each ability, personality, and method to gain knowledge or learn something.
The school can not educate all of each student.
But the saddest thing is that the special students who are far from the standard in school are often categorized as an obnormal person.
Some students are disappointed about the school judgment and they think they are not clever themselves.
However, some of them think the school is wrong and didn\'t find his/her values.
I think these people can succeed in their own life.
We have own advantage and ability for something.
If we trust ourselves, we can succeed in life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
You gave good thoughts on this one. I guess you are right. Being academically excellent doesn\'t define you and your success in the future. It is more on your abilities that will prevail once you are in the real world. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think that the education of school has a standard criterion for general students.
>>I think that schools follow a certain standards when it comes to good education.
However, every student has each ability, personality, and method to gain knowledge or learn something.
However, every student has each ability, personality, and method to gain knowledge or learn something.
>>However, every student has their own abilities, personalities, and methods to gain knowledge or learn something.
The school can not educate all of each student.
The school can not educate all of each student.
>>The school has the role of imparting knowledge to their students.
But the saddest thing is that the special students who are far from the standard in school are often categorized as an obnormal person.
But the saddest thing is that the special students who are far from the standard in school are often categorized as an obnormal person.
>>But the saddest thing is that students who are mentally challenged and can not meet the school standards are often labeled as abnormal people.
Some students are disappointed about the school judgment and they think they are not clever themselves.
Some students are disappointed about the school judgment and they think they are not clever themselves.
>>Correct
However, some of them think the school is wrong and didn\'t find his/her values.
However, some of them think the school is wrong and didn\'t find his/her values.
>>However, some of them think that the school is wrong and that the school hasn\'t tried enough to bring out the best in their students.
I think these people can succeed in their own life.
>>I think these people can succeed in their own lives/in their own right.
We have own advantage and ability for something.
We have own advantage and ability for something.
>>We have our own abilities and strengths.
If we trust ourselves, we can succeed in life.
If we trust ourselves, we can succeed in life.
>>Correct
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