5/8 homework
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Many countries are struggling to overcome coronavirus.
If I have relatives living in another country, I want to say hello and encourage them.
Nowadays, many people are losing morale and mentally impoverished since it is difficult to go out and has many restrictions by a coronavirus.
So, we can be comforted and encouraged by someone\'s small consideration and concern.
I think many people are missing an emotional relationship and a sense of solidarity now.
We don\'t need a huge activity.
I will just talk about my routine and these days\' domestic situation.
The relatives imagine my life and feel like just talk, even if we can not meet now.
Sometimes a conversation by letter is more impressive than a phone call.
When I read a letter, I imagine the person and the moment of writing the letter reminding me, and it makes me happy.
It is a huge impression and comfort by itself.
I feel most people are emotionally sensitive nowadays, and we need to care for each other.
Writing letter is a good idea
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Hi [이름],
It\'s been a while since I read your homework. Thanks for this insightful response. Have great weekend!
-Rachel
Many countries are struggling to overcome the corona virus.
>> correct
If I have relatives living in another country, I want to say hello and encourage them.
>> correct
Nowadays, many people are losing morale and mentally impoverished since it is difficult to go out and has many restrictions by a corona virus.
Nowadays, many people are losing morale and mentally impoverished since it is difficult to go out and has many restrictions by a corona virus.
>> Nowadays, many people are losing their morale and are becoming mentally impoverished since it is difficult to go out and there are many restrictions because of the corona virus.
So, we can be comforted and encouraged by someone\'s small consideration and concern.
So, we can be comforted and encouraged by someone\'s small consideration and concern.
>> correct
I think many people are missing an emotional relationship and a sense of solidarity now. We don\'t need a huge activity.
I think many people are missing an emotional relationship and a sense of solidarity now. We don\'t need a huge activity.
>> correct
I will just talk about my routine and these days\' domestic situation.
I will just talk about my routine and these days\' domestic situation.
>> correct
The relatives imagine my life and feel like just talk, even if we can not meet now.
The relatives imagine my life and feel like just talk, even if we can not meet now.
>> In that way they can picture my life and feel like we are talking even if they cannot meet me now.
Sometimes a conversation by letter is more impressive than a phone call.
Sometimes a conversation by letter is more impressive than a phone call.
>> correct
When I read a letter, I imagine the person and the moment of writing the letter reminding me, and it makes me happy.
When I read a letter, I imagine the person and the moment of writing the letter reminding me, and it makes me happy.
>> correct ( we just say, and the moment of writing the letter makes me remember)
It is a huge impression and comfort by itself.
It is a huge impression and comfort by itself.
>> correct
I feel most people are emotionally sensitive nowadays, and we need to care for each other.Writing letter is a good idea.
I feel most people are emotionally sensitive nowadays, and we need to care for each other.Writing letter is a good idea.
>> correct ( so I am hoping for a hand-written letter from you, just kidding:)
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