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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I mentioned last our class.
Check it please.
My family visited Seoul last month.
>> Correct
or
>> My family went to Seoul last month.
We met my sister-in-law\'s family for dinner.
>> Correct
We went out and had sushi and many delicious foods.
>> Correct
or
>>> We went out and ate sushi and other delicious food.
We meet each other once in a blue moon because we are all busy together.
>> We meet once in a blue moon because we are all busy.
So we talked about a lot of things.
>> Correct
My father-in-law became the center of our conversation.
>> Correct
He is still very strong and very healthy despite his age.
>> Correct
So we decited to save some money every month for him.
>> So we decided to save money for him every month.
Because we have to take care of him for his futher.
>> Because we have to take care of him in the near future.
Anyway we sepent an enjoyable time together.
>> Anyway, we spent an enjoyable time together.
>> My family went to Seoul last month. We met with my sister-in-law\'s family for dinner and ate sushi with other delicious food. We only meet once in a blue moon because we are all busy. So, we talk about a lot of things when we get the chance to meet. Last month, my father-in-law became the center of our conversation. He is still very strong and healthy despite his age. We also decided to save money for him every month as we need to take care of him as he grows older. Anyway, we spent an enjoyable time together.
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