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Now I can say I'm confident enough to be a great flight attendant through these experiences and my major as well.
Actually, I have failed in a flight attendant interview. But I didn't give up and I will never give up. I don't want to look down keeping in mind that i'm happy since there is my dream and real goal in life.
All of you guys, you are still young and still have many opportunities, so make a dream through your experience.
I am sure If you find your dream then you will be fine and happy like me. Thank you for listening and for your time. Let's all be happy!
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Now I can say I'm confident enough to be a great flight attendant through these experiences and my major as well. >> correctActually, I have failed in a flight attendant interview.
>>Actually, I failed a flight attendant interview.
But I didn't give up and I will never give up.
>> correct OR But I never gave up and I will never give up.
I don't want to look down keeping in mind that i'm happy since there is my dream and real goal in life.>>I don't want to look down keeping in mind that I'm happy since I have a dream and a real goal in life.All of you guys, you are still young and still have many opportunities, so make a dream through your experience. >>To all of you guys, you are still young and still have many opportunities, so make a dream through your experience. I am sure If you find your dream then you will be fine and happy like me.
>> correct
Thank you for listening and for your time.
>> correct
Let's all be happy!
>> correct
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