5/9 Homework

2014-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good afternoon! Homework Is education necessary for modern progress? Yes, education is necessary for improvement of Mankind. Modern science has made remarkable progress. We can improve our future life through education. The zeal for children's education in Korea is very high. So I think Korea will be developed significantly in the near future. Thank you! Have a nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]!

Thank you for this sensible essay. You made a very good point here. Just be reminded of your articles (a, an, the). Have a great weekend!

~KELLY~

Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
Homework
Is education necessary for modern progress?
Yes, education is necessary for improvement of Mankind.

>> Yes, education is necessary for the improvement of mankind.

Modern science has made remarkable progress.

>> Modern science has made a remarkable progress.

We can improve our future life through education.

>> Correct.

The zeal for children\'s education in Korea is very high.

>> Correct.

So I think Korea will be developed significantly in the near future.
>> Correct.
Thank you! Have a nice weekend!

>> Correct.

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