5/9 HONEWORK

2018-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the questions briefly. Have you ever helped someone who was feeling stressful? Yes, of course *What did you do? I usually drink together and talk. *Did you give them advice? I sad together when hear sad thing. When something good happens, we'll be happy together. I give advice when I hear something wrong.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework [이름].

You are a good man. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Have you ever helped someone who was feeling stressful?
Yes, of course 

>> CORRECT
*What did you do?
I usually drink together and talk.

>> We usually drink and talk to each other.
*Did you give them advice?
I sad together when hear sad thing.
When something good happens, we\'ll be happy together.
I give advice when I hear something wrong.

>> I feel sad when I hear something bad.

When something good happens, we also feel happy.

I only give advice when there\'s something wrong.

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