5-9th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There is no understanding about the older even though they were our parents.
Nowadays, I considered about the reason why I didn't understand them.
When I was younger than now, I didn't understand their action that was very slow.
But I'm getting old, my body and mind are being changed.
So, I feel the thing that I couldn't feel when I was young.
I didn't feel dizzy when someone rotate me but now I feel dizzy.
Someone said to me that it's because of your age.
Everybody gets older, there is no exception.
In this holidays, we went to the parents house.
Our parents are getting older, which I feel whenever I meet them.
But it is a very natural thing for all human being.
I am also getting older, so that I start to understand them and me.
I consider my life that finally ends someday.
So I try to enjoy my life as possible as I can.
Whenever I want to travel abroad, if there is no difficulty about the money I would like to take a chance for the travel.
Nowadays, I begin to like a travel more.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! :)
Thank you for writing an essay even if you were busy during the long holiday.
You\'re right when you said we are all destined to grow old and weak.
That\'s why, we should always treasure all of the things we have and enjoy life more.
Anyhow, I hope your\'e doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
There is no understanding about the older even though they were our parents.
>> [Do you mean]: It is difficult to understand our elderly even though they are our parents.
Nowadays, I considered about the reason why I didn\'t understand them.
>> Nowadays, I considered the reason why I didn\'t understand them.
When I was younger than now, I didn\'t understand their action that was very slow.
>> When I was younger, I didn\'t understand their action that was very slow.
But I\'m getting old, my body and mind are being changed.
>> But I\'m getting old and my body and mind are being changed.
OR >> But I\'m getting old. My body and mind are being changed.
So, I feel the thing that I couldn\'t feel when I was young.
>> So, I feel that thing that I couldn\'t feel when I was young.
I didn\'t feel dizzy when someone rotate me but now I feel dizzy.
>> I didn\'t feel dizzy when someone rotates me but now I feel dizzy.
OR >> I didn\'t feel dizzy when someone spins me around but now I feel dizzy.
Someone said to me that it\'s because of your age.
>> Someone said to me that it\'s because of my age.
Everybody gets older, there is no exception.
>> Everybody gets older. There is no exception.
OR >> Everybody gets older and there is no exception.
In this holidays, we went to the parents house.
>> In this holiday, we went to our parents\' house.
Our parents are getting older, which I feel whenever I meet them.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Our parents are getting older and I feel that whenever I see them.
But it is a very natural thing for all human being.
>> But it is a very natural thing for all human beings.
I am also getting older, so that I start to understand them and me.
>> I am also getting older, so I am now starting to understand them and myself.
I consider my life that finally ends someday.
>> I consider that my life will finally end someday.
So I try to enjoy my life as possible as I can.
>> So, I try to enjoy my life as much as possible.
OR >> So, I try to enjoy my life as much as much as I can.
Whenever I want to travel abroad, if there is no difficulty about the money I would like to take a chance for the travel.
>> Whenever I want to travel abroad, if there is no difficulty about the money, I would like to take a chance to travel.
Nowadays, I begin to like a travel more.
>> Nowadays, I begin to like traveling more.
Thank you for writing an essay even if you were busy during the long holiday.
You\'re right when you said we are all destined to grow old and weak.
That\'s why, we should always treasure all of the things we have and enjoy life more.
Anyhow, I hope your\'e doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
There is no understanding about the older even though they were our parents.
>> [Do you mean]: It is difficult to understand our elderly even though they are our parents.
Nowadays, I considered about the reason why I didn\'t understand them.
>> Nowadays, I considered the reason why I didn\'t understand them.
When I was younger than now, I didn\'t understand their action that was very slow.
>> When I was younger, I didn\'t understand their action that was very slow.
But I\'m getting old, my body and mind are being changed.
>> But I\'m getting old and my body and mind are being changed.
OR >> But I\'m getting old. My body and mind are being changed.
So, I feel the thing that I couldn\'t feel when I was young.
>> So, I feel that thing that I couldn\'t feel when I was young.
I didn\'t feel dizzy when someone rotate me but now I feel dizzy.
>> I didn\'t feel dizzy when someone rotates me but now I feel dizzy.
OR >> I didn\'t feel dizzy when someone spins me around but now I feel dizzy.
Someone said to me that it\'s because of your age.
>> Someone said to me that it\'s because of my age.
Everybody gets older, there is no exception.
>> Everybody gets older. There is no exception.
OR >> Everybody gets older and there is no exception.
In this holidays, we went to the parents house.
>> In this holiday, we went to our parents\' house.
Our parents are getting older, which I feel whenever I meet them.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Our parents are getting older and I feel that whenever I see them.
But it is a very natural thing for all human being.
>> But it is a very natural thing for all human beings.
I am also getting older, so that I start to understand them and me.
>> I am also getting older, so I am now starting to understand them and myself.
I consider my life that finally ends someday.
>> I consider that my life will finally end someday.
So I try to enjoy my life as possible as I can.
>> So, I try to enjoy my life as much as possible.
OR >> So, I try to enjoy my life as much as much as I can.
Whenever I want to travel abroad, if there is no difficulty about the money I would like to take a chance for the travel.
>> Whenever I want to travel abroad, if there is no difficulty about the money, I would like to take a chance to travel.
Nowadays, I begin to like a travel more.
>> Nowadays, I begin to like traveling more.
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