5 DAY HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
When do you feel gloomy?
I feel gloomy when I miss my grandfa.
My grandfa always played with me when I was kid
So I have a lot of joyful experience with my grandfa,
강사 첨삭
It appears that you had a happy childhood, Sophie! I envy you for having had the opportunity to know your grandfather. Treasure those memories. -Faith-
When do you feel gloomy?
>> CORRECT
I feel gloomy when I miss my grandfa.
>> I feel gloomy when I miss my grandfather.
My grandfa always played with me when I was kid
>> My grandfather always played with me when I was a kid.
So I have a lot of joyful experience with my grandfa,
>> Therefore, I have a lot of joyful experiences with my grandfather,
>> CORRECT
I feel gloomy when I miss my grandfa.
>> I feel gloomy when I miss my grandfather.
My grandfa always played with me when I was kid
>> My grandfather always played with me when I was a kid.
So I have a lot of joyful experience with my grandfa,
>> Therefore, I have a lot of joyful experiences with my grandfather,
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