5 reasons why getting up early is important

2018-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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First, I can spend time more effectively. The later we get up, the later we start our days and things to do. It leads us to delay our homework or tasks to tomorrow or after. There are only a few things left to do for the night. Second, we get more tired. We can't deny we feel way more tired when we get up in the morning late even after enough hours of sleep. Becausㄷ of this it also is more likely we waste time. Third, this schedule keeps in cycle. Once we get into this schedule, go to bed and wake up late, it's hard to get away from it. It's important we don't step into this bad cycle at the first. Forth, we can't help but skip breakfast. It's important we have 3 meals a day at a right time, but we wake up late and can't have breakfast, which can cause lack of nutrition. Last, we feel good. It just feels great to wake up early. I feel like I am so strong-willed and can start my day awesome. This different feeling today can bring something different from yesterday!

강사 첨삭

Hi! You really did great today. Please check the following:
1. First, I can spend time more effectively.
>>First, I can use my time efficiently.
2. The later we get up, the later we start our days and things to do.
>>The later we get up, the later we can accomplish things.
3. It leads us to delay our homework or tasks to tomorrow or after.
>>It results to delaying our homework or our tasks the next day or after.
4. There are only a few things left to do for the night.
>>There are only a few things left to do at night.
5. Second, we get more tired.
>>Second, we get tired more.
6. We can\'t deny we feel way more tired when we get up in the morning late even after enough hours of sleep. Becausㄷ of this it also is more likely we waste time.
>>We can\'t deny the fact that we feel more tired when we get up late in the morning even if we have enough hours of sleep. Because of this, it is also more likely that we waste time.
7.Third, this schedule keeps in cycle.
>> Third, this habit of waking up late becomes a cycle.
8. Once we get into this schedule, go to bed and wake up late, it\'s hard to get away from it. It\'s important we don\'t step into this bad cycle at the first.
>>Once we get into this schedule; go to bed and wake up late; it\'s hard to break away from it. It\'s important that we don\'t encourage this habit at the beginning.
9. Fourth, we can\'t help but skip breakfast.
>> Fourth, tendency is that we skip breakfast.
10. It\'s important we have 3 meals a day at a right time, but we wake up late and can\'t have breakfast, which can cause lack of nutrition.
>> It\'s important to have 3 meals a day at the right time. But, if we wake up late and skip breakfast, it may cause nutrition deficiency.
11. Last, we feel good.
>> Lastly, we feel good.
12.It just feels great to wake up early. I feel like I am so strong-willed and can start my day awesome. This different feeling today can bring something different from yesterday!
>> It just feels great to wake up early. I feel like I am so strong-willed and can start my day awesome. This feeling today can be different from yesterday!

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