5 things that I expect from my 10 minute\'s class with Sharon
학생이 쓴 원문
Since I transfer my current job from prevjous one,
Unfortunately, I don\'t have much chances to use my English recently. So I\'d like to practice, maintain and improve my English as much as I can thru this service.
I hope to improve my english like the below.
1. Make the sentences simple and consise
2. Use the right or appropriate words that fit in the situations
3. Be more careful to pronounce the words correctly.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
I would keep everything in mind.
I also hope that we would be able to establish a relationship of mutual trust.
Let\'s do this together!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Since I transfer my current job from prevjous one,
>> I transferred to a new company and this is my current job.
Unfortunately, I don\'t have much chances to use my English recently.
Unfortunately, I don\'t have much chances to use my English recently.
>> Unfortunately, I don\'t have a lot of opportunities to use my English recently.
So I\'d like to practice, maintain and improve my English as much as I can thru this service.
>> So I\'d like to practice, maintain and improve my English skills as much as I can thru this service.
I hope to improve my english like the below.
I hope to improve my english like the below.
>> I hope to improve my skills as follows:
1. Make the sentences simple and consise
>> I want to make simple and concise sentences.
2. Use the right or appropriate words that fit in the situations
2. Use the right or appropriate words that fit in the situations
>> I want to use the words appropriate for a given situation.
3. Be more careful to pronounce the words correctly.
3. Be more careful to pronounce the words correctly.
>> I want to be more careful in pronouncing the words correctly.
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