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I want to change our topic. I will tell you about "My favorite places to visit in my country is…" I enjoy traveling to Jeju Island. I like to go there because it is warm and scenery is beautiful. Also, the local food is very delicious. I went there with my family when my oldest daughter was very young and we had a great time. Another place I like is Seorak Mountain. It is one of the highest mountains in my country. I enjoy visiting this mountain in the fall because the leaaves are very colorful.

    Hello [이름]!   I appreciate you for submitting your homework early. You did well. You got almost perfect. You just missed to put \'the\'. Since you are talking about a definite place, you have to use \'the\'. Check your spelling too.   Teacher Venus^^   I want to change our topic. >>>CORRECT I will tell you about \"My favorite places to visit in my country is…\">>>CORRECT I enjoy traveling to Jeju Island. >>>CORRECT I like to go there because it is warm and scenery is beautiful. >>>I like to go there because it is warm and the scenery is beautiful. Also, the local food is very delicious. >>>CORRECT I went there with my family when my oldest daughter was very young and we had a great time. >>>CORRECT Another place I like is Seorak Mountain. >>>CORRECT It is one of the highest mountains in my country.>>>CORRECT   I enjoy visiting this mountain in the fall because the leaaves are very colorful. >>>I enjoy visiting this mountain in the fall because the leaves are very colorful.