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Good evening Coach, this is [이름]. I always attend the basketball practice on the weekend. However, I can't attend it this weekend. Because I have to go to the my office. These days I am very busy so I have to do the extra work this weekend. The basketball is my favorite hobby. While I do it, I am very happy and I can lose my weight. I am so sorry. I can attend the basketball practice next weekend. See you later.

Hello [이름]!   Now this what I call a fine job! Remember that while is used with a subject and a verb (while + subject + verb). Some examples: The phone rang while I was watching TV. I met him while we were studying in the library. Teacher Venus^^   Good evening Coach, this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I always attend the basketball practice on the weekend. >>>CORRECT However, I can\'t attend it this weekend. >>>CORRECT Because I have to go to the my office. >>>Because I have to go to my office. These days I am very busy so I have to do the extra work this weekend. >>>CORRECT The basketball is my favorite hobby. >>>Basketball is my favorite hobby. While I do it, I am very happy and I can lose my weight. >>>Whenever do it, I am very happy because I can lose some weight. I am so sorry. >>>CORRECT I can attend the basketball practice next weekend.>>>CORRECT   See you later. >>>CORRECT