50. Homework

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Q. If you could change one thing about [yourself/your past] what would you change?
If I could change the thing regarding of myself, I would change my gender since I already have been living male life.

>>If I could change one thing regarding myself, I would change my gender since I have already  been living as a male.

So, I want to be having woman’s life.

>>So, I want to have a woman’s life.

And I would be the girl as a queen of bee called earning everything without any effort among the groups because I know how to handle guys in group life.

>>And I would be a girl like the queen of bees called earning everything without any effort among the groups because I know how to handle guys in a group.
Or if I have an ability to change on thing about past time, I would earn money directly after I graduated from high school instead of studying in the university.

>>Or if I have the ability to change one thing about my past, I would earn money directly after I graduated high school instead of studying in the university.

And I would buy stocks before it becomes famous such as Samsung, Apple, Facebook, Google and etc….

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That\'s because it will be super extremely higher than past.

>>That\'s because it will be super extremely expensive than in the past.

Additional, I would buy a lot of bit coin due to the fact that it becomes ultra-expensive nowadays.

>>In addition, I would buy a lot of bit coin due to the fact that it becomes ultra-expensive nowadays.

Hence, I might become like Mr. [Name] called the king of investor in the world.

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