50th Homework

Conscience is an important item to live together. Fame, money and power are just related with yourself. These are necessary things to conveniently live only yourself. If you have a lot of money, you can buy anything. If you have a power, you can do anything that no can do. We live together in the same time and the same space. We have to help each other to get along with. If we don't do that, there would be a lot of struggles to take them. It would be finally a war. Conscience is the thing that human only have. If the member of the society obey their conscience, the society would get better. However, there is a contrary opinion. Fame, power, money are the result of person's efforts. Therefore, we don't have to neglect the efforts. In the history of human, if human don't have these like a greedy or curiosity, the achievement like the modern would not appear. In this process, the outputs are represented like that. I think conscience is not more powerful motivator than fame, money, power.

Hi, [이름]! :) Thank you for sharing something about this topic. I think nowadays, conscience is not a very effective motivator anymore. Although I agree that conscience is something that separates us from all walks of life. It is sad because many of us choose to repress our conscience and let money, greed or power take over us. Maybe some us think that these are all necessary to survive in a harsh environment. I don\'t blame them. However, this world would be a lot better if we let our conscience work for us. Anyhow, that is my opinion regarding this. See you again next week. ^_^Take care and God bless. ~Teacher C[이름] Conscience is an important item to live together. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Conscience is an important part of life. Fame, money and power are just related with yourself. >> Fame, money and power are things that we just value individually. These are necessary things to conveniently live only yourself. >> These are necessary things for us to conveniently live. If you have a lot of money, you can buy anything. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you have lots of money, you can purchase anything. If you have a power, you can do anything that no can do. >> If you have power, you can do things that others cannot do. We live together in the same time and the same space. >> CORRECT! OR >> We coexist in the same time and space. We have to help each other to get along with. >> We have to help each other to get along with others. If we don\'t do that, there would be a lot of struggles to take them. >> If we don\'t do that, there would be a lot of struggles for them. It would be finally a war. >> It would end up in war. Conscience is the thing that human only have. >> Conscience is something that only humans have. If the member of the society obey their conscience, the society would get better. >> If the members of the society obey their conscience, the society would get better. However, there is a contrary opinion. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, there is also a contradicting opinion. Fame, power, money are the result of person\'s efforts. >> Fame, power and money are the result of a person\'s efforts. Therefore, we don\'t have to neglect the efforts. >> CORRECT! OR >> That is why we shouldn\'t neglect the efforts. In the history of human, if human don\'t have these like a greedy or curiosity, the achievement like the modern would not appear. >> In the history, if humans didn\'t have greed or were not curious, the achievement of a modern world would not happen. In this process, the outputs are represented like that. >> CORRECT! OR >> Through this process, the outputs are shown that way. I think conscience is not more powerful motivator than fame, money, power. >> I think conscience is not more powerful than fame, money, or power.