51. Homework

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Q. If you could trade places with anybody in the world, who would it be and why?
If I have a chance to trade places with anybody in the world, I will be able to change it with a person who is the king of United Arab Emirates.

>>If I have a chance to trade places with anybody in the world, I would want to change it with a person who is the king of United Arab Emirates.

That’s because there is plenty of oil under their area and it’s belongs to him so I don’t need to work anymore.

>>That’s because there is plenty of oil under their area and it belongs to him so I don’t need to work anymore.

Hence, I will have a lot of super cars, pricey watches, and gorgeous houses.

>>CORRECT

Furthermore, I will be able to do what I want to do.

>>CORRECT

Thus, I might not get any stress regarding of the cost to buy something and I can eliminate the areas on my list that I had been for a travelling.

>>Thus, I might not get any stress regarding the cost of something I want tobuy  and I can eliminate the areas on my list that I had been to for travelling.

Anyway, I envy the person who doesn’t need to worry about spending money since I little bit tired to work.

>>Anyway, I envy the person who doesn’t need to worry about spending money because for me, I get tired working.