51th Homework

2016-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

I think books and stories teach us anything useful. Reading the book and listening to the story is a kind of an indirect experience. Generally, many people could not directly experience events since they were not there when it happened. And also many people want to know about the events more detail. Therefore, they read books and watch TV and listen to the story related with the events. If the contents of the books or events are not real, these are novels. There are many characters that could not seen in the real world. It's because their characteristics are exaggerated to be apparently shown a personality. If they, especially trouble makers, are in the real world, nobody would get along with them. If we are in this point of view, we could learn about something when we communicate with others. The books have a lot of information of things what we can not directly see. I think the books are very good thing to get an information, and it is good for us to easily approach to the books.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^_^ Thank you very much for writing this essay. I think books are very useful because they provide a lot of useful information. They say that experience is the best teacher but it\'s okay to learn from books. It\'s because more often than not, experiences are usually painful. Anyhow, I hope you are having a great day at work. See you tomorrow. ^_^ ~Teacher C[이름] I think books and stories teach us anything useful. >> I think books and stories can teach us useful things. Reading the book and listening to the story is a kind of an indirect experience. >> CORRECT! OR >> Reading the book and listening to the story is like an indirect experience. Generally, many people could not directly experience events since they were not there when it happened. >> CORRECT! OR >> Generally, many people could not directly experience big/major events because they were not there when it took place. And also many people want to know about the events more detail. >> Also, many people want to know more details about the events. Therefore, they read books and watch TV and listen to the story related with the events. >> Therefore, they read books, watch TV and listen to the story related with/to the events. If the contents of the books or events are not real, these are novels. >> If the contents of the books or events are not real, these are fictions. There are many characters that could not seen in the real world. >> There are many characters that could not  be seen in the real world. It\'s because their characteristics are exaggerated to be apparently shown a personality. >> It\'s because their characteristics are apparently exaggerated to exist in real life. If they, especially trouble makers, are in the real world, nobody would get along with them. >> If trouble makers are in the real world, nobody would get along with them. If we are in this point of view, we could learn about something when we communicate with others. >> CORRECT! OR >> If we look at it this way, we could learn about something when we communicate with others. The books have a lot of information of things what we can not directly see. >> The books have a lot of information of things that we can not directly see. I think the books are very good thing to get an information, and it is good for us to easily approach to the books. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think the books are very good sources of information, and it is easy for us to use them.

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