52. Homework

2018-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

If Steven gets out, he'll never take an umbrella with him. (that’s because he always forgets to bring it) If Steven gets out, he could be better in Social Studies. (he doesn’t go out so if he goes out he will make friends and they would help him better social life) If Jack was at school today, he would know about the History test. (that’s because teacher gave other classmates tips about the history test) If Jack was at school today, he would be in the school team. (that’s because the school team gathered members just today) If Steven eats so many sweets, he will get fat. (that’s because sweets make bodies fatter) If Jack washed his feet, he could be better in Social Studies. (that’s because smell of his feet was terrible. And it has ruined his relations with others) If Jack washed his feet, his neighbor would not be angry with him. (that’s because his neighbor has complained to him about smell of his feet which was terrible.) If Jack washed his feet, it would not smell in our room. (that’s because smell of his feet was terrible. Hence, it makes smell bed in our room) If Jack washed his feet, the air in the room will be better. (that’s because smell of his feet was terrible. Thus, it makes air dirty) If Steven didn't foul the other players so often, he can save more money. (he paid a lot of money to the other players who had got injured because of him.) If Steven didn't foul the other players so often, he would be in the school team. (he was fired from the team in the school since the other players who had damaged complained him to management in the school.)

강사 첨삭

Hey, Jason!(\",)

Wow! that\'s all I can say! Great job!(\",)

If Steven gets out, he\'ll never take an umbrella with him.
(that’s because he always forgets to bring it)
>> correct!
If Steven gets out, he could be better in Social Studies.
(he doesn’t go out so if he goes out he will make friends and they would help him have a better social life)
>> correct!
 If Jack was at school today, he would know about the History test.
(that’s because teacher gave other classmates tips about the history test)
>> correct!
If Jack was at school today, he would be in the school team.
(that’s because the school team gathered members just today)
>> correct!
If Steven eats so many sweets, he will get fat.
(that’s because sweets make bodies fatter)
>> correct!
If Jack washed his feet, he could be better in Social Studies.
(that’s because smell of his feet was terrible. And it has ruined his relations with others)
>> correct!
If Jack washed his feet, his neighbor would not be angry with him.
(that’s because his neighbor has complained to him about the smell of his feet which was terrible.)
>> correct!
If Jack washed his feet, it would not smell in our room.
(that’s because the smell of his feet was terrible. Hence, it makes our room smelly)
>> correct!
If Jack washed his feet, the air in the room will be better.
(that’s because the smell of his feet was terrible. Thus, it makes the air dirty)
>> correct!
If Steven didn\'t foul the other players so often, he can save more money.
(he paid a lot of money to the other players who got injured because of him.)
>> correct!
If Steven didn\'t foul the other players so often, he would be in the school team.
(he was fired from the team in the school since the other players who had injury complained about him to the management in school.)

>> correct!

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