53. Homework

2018-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

If someone is late an appointment with me, I would feel disappoint to him or her. That’s because I always think that the time management is the basic attitude if they have an appointment to meet each other. A person who waits for the other will be wasting time without any reason, and a person might be prepared earlier to get the place on time. There is a famous story in the book called The Little Prince and it supports my opinion. A fox in the book said “if you come here at four o’clock, I will be happy since 3 o’clock. When the time has been closed almost 4 o’clock, I might be happier. When the time becomes 4 o’clock, I feel like anxious and I will not be able to do anything. Hence, I don’t like to meet a person who always be late coming an appointment. I think it means they don’t care of the others feeling and time also. Furthermore, I'm sure that is their habit if it happens sequentially. Moreover, they are very rude to others.

강사 첨삭

Thank you very much, Jason^^

It has been a while since I checked my student\'s homework, I must definitely say, I missed it!

I hate it when some people come to our appointment late, because, I myself hate wasting time.

Imagine, in 30 minutes, we could have actually done a lot of things.

If someone is late an appointment with me, I would feel disappoint to him or her.

>>If someone is late for an appointment with me, I would feel disappointed of him or her.

That’s because I always think that the time management is the basic attitude if they have an appointment to meet each other.

>>That’s because I always think that time management is a basic attitude if they have an appointment to meet a person.

A person who waits for the other will be wasting time without any reason, and a person might be prepared earlier to get the place on time.

>> A person who waits for the other will be wasting time without any reason, and a person might be prepared earlier to get to the place on time.
There is a famous story in the book called The Little Prince and it supports my opinion.

>>CORRECT!

A fox in the book said “if you come here at four o’clock, I will be happy since 3 o’clock. When the time has been closed almost 4 o’clock, I might be happier. When the time becomes 4 o’clock, I feel like anxious and I will not be able to do anything.

>>A fox in the book said, “if you come here at four o’clock, I will be happy since 3 o’clock. When the time is almost 4 o’clock, I might be happier. When the time becomes 4 o’clock, I feel anxious and I will not be able to do anything.
Hence, I don’t like to meet a person who always be late coming an appointment.

>>Hence, I don’t like to meet a person who is always late for an appointment.
I think it means they don’t care of the others feeling and time also.

>> I think it means they don’t care about the others\' feeling as well as time.

Furthermore, I\'m sure that is their habit if it happens sequentially.

>>CORRECT!

Moreover, they are very rude to others.

>>CORRECT!

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