56. Homework

2018-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. Choose one quotation that defines who you are and explain why that quotation describes you so well. When I was in university, I figured that I didn’t have any special abilities with this life. So, I thought about my life seriously and, few days later, I have heard about the quotation below. ‘There is no magic, just practice, practice and practice.’ Thus, even though, I will have hard time gotten during the things that I must do, I will not give it up since I believe in the quotation and it might be better few times later. Furthermore, there is a formula called ‘The 10,000 Hours Rule’. I guess that is the same meaning with that I mentioned. Anyways, when I have been described by the others about who I am, they explain that I am an earnest person since I try to do hard and steady. To be brief my achievement, I will study English until I speak it fluently with native speakers regardless of learning it slowly. So, I am going to keep on my quotation which I choose making it to be worthy

강사 첨삭

Thank you very much for your homework, Jason^^

In my case, my favorite is \"Don\'t stop when you\'re tired, stop when you\'re done.\"

I honestly feel exhausted physically and mentally, but looking at my goals at the end of my journey pushes me harder.

Q. Choose one quotation that defines who you are and explain why that quotation describes you so well.
>>CORRECT!
When I was in university, I figured that I didn’t have any special abilities with this life.

>>When I was at university, I figured that I didn’t have any special abilities.

So, I thought about my life seriously and, few days later, I have heard about the quotation below.
>> So, I thought about my life seriously, and a few days later, I have heard about the quotation below.
‘There is no magic, just practice, practice and practice.’
>>CORRECT!
Thus, even though, I will have hard time gotten during the things that I must do, I will not give it up since I believe in the quotation and it might be better few times later.

>>Thus, even though, I have a hard time during the things that I must do, I will not give it up since I believe in the quotation and it might be better a few times later.

Furthermore, there is a formula called ‘The 10,000 Hours Rule’.

>>CORRECT!

I guess that is the same meaning with that I mentioned.
>>I guess that is the same meaning with what I mentioned.
Anyways, when I have been described by the others about who I am, they explain that I am an earnest person since I try to do hard and steady.
>>Anyways, when I am described by others, they explain that I am an earnest person since I try to do hard and steadily.
To be brief my achievement, I will study English until I speak it fluently with native speakers regardless of learning it slowly.

>>To make my achievement brief, I will study English until I speak it fluently with native speakers regardless of learning it slowly.

So, I am going to keep on my quotation which I choose making it to be worthy.

>>Hence, I am going to keep on my quotation which I choose making it to be worthy.

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