57. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Oh, me too, Jason!
Going home and finishing my tasks early make me happy^^
Moreover, teaching my students and seeing them learn make my heart grateful^^
See you, and have a nice day!
Q. What makes your day nice?
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I am just going to add things what makes me day nice in my routine life
>>I am just going to add things that make my day nice in my routine life.
I get up almost 6 am with a morning alarm.
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If I don’t get up on time, sequentially, next schedule would be ruined.
>>If I don’t get up on time, sequentially, the next schedule would be ruined.
So, it makes me happy when I get up at exact 6 am
>>So, it makes me happy when I get up at exactly 6 am.
I go to toilet to wash my face, shampoo, and shower.
>>I go to toilet to wash my face, shampoo my hair, and shower.
While I take a shower using warm water, I am happy since I like it.
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If the temperature of rain is warm, I am going to take a shower in the rain.
>>If the temperature of the rain is warm, I am going to take a shower in the rain.
Sometimes, when I get stress, I stand under dropping warm water and think about what makes me stress.
>> Sometimes, when I get stressed, I stand under warm water and think about what makes me stressed.
Furthermore, I organize my feeling until I feel relaxed
>>Furthermore, I organize my feeling until I feel relaxed.
Anyway, after that, I drive to the site which I have been working in Incheon.
>>Anyway, after that, I drive to the site where I have been working.
While I drive, I drink coffee that I made with warm milk, americano which I bought in the market, and maple syrup that I bought thought the online shopping myself at home and it makes my feeling better since it’s delicious.
>>While I drive, I drink coffee that I made with warm milk, americano which I bought in the market, and maple syrup that I bought through online shopping myself at home and it makes my feeling better since it’s delicious.
If I don’t meet traffic jam on the way to go to the site, I am happy with that since it makes my drive harder.
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Moreover, I am going to be able to have breakfast for free after I arrived at the office on time since the company that I work pays it.
>>Moreover, I am going to be able to have breakfast for free after I arrived at the office on time since the company that I work at pays for it.
What if I arrive late, I can’t have breakfast and it makes me harder since I can’t stand with the feeling starving.
>>If I arrive late, I can’t have breakfast and it is harder for me since I can’t stand the feeling of starvation.
And after I finish working on time or earlier, it makes me happy since I will be able to get free time more.
>>And after I finish working on time or earlier, it makes me happy since I will be able to get more free time.
When I arrive home, I have deserts a little such as bananas, oranges, or snacks since I have to go swimming at 9:00pm.
>>When I arrive home, I have deserts a little such as bananas, oranges, or snacks since I have to go swimming at 9:00pm.
After finishing swimming at 10:00pm, I take some eggs with milks instead of having dinner.
>>After swimming at 10:00pm, I take some eggs with milks instead of having dinner.
And I do homework every single night.
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If I am done to do it fast, I have a time to watch American dramas called friends or watch Korean movies.
>>If I am done doing it fast, I have time to watch American dramas called \"Friends\", or watch Korean movies.
Those kind of small things make my feeling nice. 
>>Those kinds of small things make my feeling nice.
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