58. Homework

In our country, it is very common to blame the government for not providing enough jobs for its people.

However, I hate this idea for I strongly believe that it is our own will to chase different opportunities.

Thank you for this Jason, and have a great day!

Q. In many countries today, there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation?
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In my own opinion, our old generations who didn’t have a chance to get an enough education services owing to the wars, poverty, and each different reason thought that education were important.
>>In my own opinion, our old generation who didn’t have a chance to get an enough education service owing to the wars, poverty, and each different reason thought that education was important.
Thus, they support their children to go university getting various knowledge there since they didn’t want their progeny following their poor life.
>>Thus, they support their children to go university getting various knowledge there since they didn’t want their progeny to follow their poor life.
However, people who already had enough money at that time made various universities and have been gathering amount of money.
>>However, people who already had enough money at that time made various universities and have been gathering a massive amount of money.
That’s why there are a lot of useless universities nowadays.

>>CORRECT!

 Following of this phenomenon, they have been giving useless certifications to the students, and it did not help students get a job after graduation.
>>Following  this phenomenon, they have been giving useless certifications to the students, and it did not help students get a job after graduation. 
Furthermore, if they didn’t have it, others would guess that they have a problem although they have already known it’s useless certification.
>>Furthermore, if they didn’t have it, others would guess that they have a problem although they have already known it’s a useless certification.
This kind of society have made this situation which many highly qualified graduates without employment.
>>This kind of society have made many highly qualified graduates jobless.
Anyways, I don’t have any other opinion since I am not a researcher regarding of this, hence, I’m not familiar with this.
>>Anyways, I don’t have any other opinion since I am not a researcher regarding this; hence, I’m not familiar with this.
But I figure it is also parts of factors with this problem

>> But I figure it is also one of the factors of this problem.