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2011-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1.d, 2.a, 3.b, 4.a, 5.c I didn't realize that I didn't do my homework. The fact that I am on a winter vacation right now makes me be lazy. Probably I was so tired from a lot of works at school, therefore I was sleeping all the time at home, even though I have a interview in about two weeks. I hope I recover from the tiresome as soon as possible. Anyway, I'm losing somethings to write on composition page, so I decide to write about the answers to the interview quesitons. Q: Tell me about your vistion as a teacher. I have a vision as a teacher. The vision is that I would like to become a teacher who are willing to keep studying for his own improvment, such as studying how to speak Enlgish perfectly and writing about English Grammar book. Also, I want to be a teacher who has a good relationship with his students. It is difficult for teacher to build rapport in the classroom. I would talk about what the students are currently interested in.

강사 첨삭

Hello there it\'s Friday today and I have enjoyed talking to you this week. I have noticed that you have many improvements in your sentences composition and proper pronunciation of words. I hope you keep it up. Thanks for sending your compositions every now and then. I enjoy giving corrections if there are and I am really happy every time you perfect the task. I hope you keep up faith in yourself. Teacher Sheela    1. d, 2.a, 3.b, 4.a, 5.c 1. My mother works in a laboratory. A. Past             B. Present        C. Future 2.Martin took his bike to the repair shop. A. Past             B. Present        C. Future >>CORRECT 3.Lindsay will go to middle school next year. A. Past             B. Present        C. Future >>CORRECT 4.The children skated all afternoon. A. Past             B. Present        C. Future >>CORRECT 5.The grade four class will go to the museum on Thursday. A. Past             B. Present        C. Future >>CORRECT I didn\'t realize that I didn\'t do my homework. >>CORRECT The fact that I am on a winter vacation right now makes me be lazy. >> The fact that I am on a winter vacation right now makes me become lazy. >> (OR) The fact that I am on a winter vacation right now makes me lazy. Probably I was so tired from a lot of works at school, therefore I was sleeping all the time at home, even though I have a interview in about two weeks. >> Probably I was so tired from load of works at school, therefore I have sleept all the time at home, even if I have an interview in about two weeks. I hope I recover from the tiresome as soon as possible. >>CORRECT >> (OR) I hope I recover from the fatigue as soon as possible. Anyway, I\'m losing somethings to write on composition page, so I decide to write about the answers to the interview quesitons. >> Anyway, I\'m losing some things to write in the composition page, so I decide to write about the answers to the interview questions. Q: Tell me about your vistion as a teacher. >> Q: Tell me about your vision as a teacher. I have a vision as a teacher. >>CORRECT The vision is that I would like to become a teacher who are willing to keep studying for his own improvment, such as studying how to speak Enlgish perfectly and writing about English Grammar book. >> My vision is that I would like to become a teacher who is willing to keep on studying for his own improvement, such as studying how to speak English perfectly and to write about English Grammar book. Also, I want to be a teacher who has a good relationship with his students. It is difficult for teacher to build rapport in the classroom. >> I would also want to be a teacher who has a good relationship with his students. It is difficult for teacher to build rapport in the classroom. >>CORRECT I would talk about what the students are currently interested in. >>CORRECT  

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