5th August
학생이 쓴 원문
I learned 'tip off' this morning.
Nowadays I'm realizing the importance of the tipping off.
Why? The present age is the information age. So, It's very important how much it have comparing with other people.
To be honest with you, I'm not social person to other collegues.
I'd like to press them or be positioning the higher level.
But as time goes by, I recognize I'm wrong.
So I have to improve the mutual cooperation with boss level colleagues.
I'm a little bit having a strong opinion person about the work.
This character sometimes makes me conflict with higher lever coworker.
I'll try to develop the harmonyship with coworkers, especially with boss level ones.
After achieving this, I can use the advantage of tipping off.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I think that is a great idea. I know that everyone has their personal reasons for doing so but that doesn't make you a lesser person it's just that you have different insights about life. But it is also okay to improve yourself. I hope you will find your way. See you on Monday!
- T.Faye -
Here are your corrections:
I learned 'tip off' this morning.
>>Correct!Nowadays I'm realizing the importance of the tipping off.
>>Nowadays, I'm realizing the importance of the phrase tipping off.Why? The present age is the information age.
>>Correct!
So, It's very important how much it have comparing with other people.
>>So it's very important to know how much it influences me compared to other people To be honest with you, I'm not social person to other collegues.
>>To be honest with you, I don't socialize with other colleagues.I'd like to press them or be positioning the higher level.
>>I'd like to press them or I want to have a higher position.But as time goes by, I recognize I'm wrong.
>>Correct!
>>But as times go by, I realize I'm wrong.So I have to improve the mutual cooperation with boss level colleagues.
>>Correct!I'm a little bit having a strong opinion person about the work.
>>I'm having a little bit of strength about the work. This character sometimes makes me conflict with higher lever coworker.
>>My characteristics are sometimes conflicted with higher level coworkers.I'll try to develop the harmonyship with coworkers, especially with boss level ones.
>>I'll try to develop the harmonious relationship with coworkers, and boss?After achieving this, I can use the advantage of tipping off.
>>Corrrect!
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