5th composition..
학생이 쓴 원문
today is the fifth class. nowadays i'm so happy because i can feel a improving my english skill. if it is not much. but anyway i can feel it. so it makes me so happy! before this class, i do hesitate to speak to someone. i'm so appreciate my teacher "Faye" ^^. now is just the 5days. but. i'll do my best to focus on the class. and i'll try to preview and review everyday. i didnt do that from now. i just study only the class time. someday.. i'll wanna be a good speaker as like a native. ^^
강사 첨삭
[이름], you are a wonderful writer but you have to be careful with the capitalization of letters especially in the beginning of your sentences.
today is the fifth class.
>>Today is the fifth class
nowadays i'm so happy because i can feel a improving my english skill.
>>Nowadays, I am so happy because I notice the improvements with my English skills.
if it is not much.
>>It is not much.
but anyway i can feel it.
>>Anyway, I can notice it.
so it makes me so happy!
>>That's makes me so happy!
before this class, i do hesitate to speak to someone.
>>Before this class, I hesitated speaking to someone.
i'm so appreciate my teacher "Faye" ^^.
>>I really appreciate you, Teacher Faye.
now is just the 5days. but. i'll do my best to focus on the class.
>>It has only been 5 days today, but I will do my best to focus in the class
and i'll try to preview and review everyday.
>>I'll try to preview and review everyday.
i didnt do that from now.
>>I didn't do that until now.
i just study only the class time.
>>I only study during the class time.
someday.. i'll wanna be a good speaker as like a native. ^^
>>Someday, I want to be a good speaker just like a native speaker.
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