5th composition..

2011-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sally

학생이 쓴 원문

today is the fifth class. nowadays i'm so happy because i can feel a improving my english skill. if it is not much. but anyway i can feel it. so it makes me so happy! before this class, i do hesitate to speak to someone. i'm so appreciate my teacher "Faye" ^^. now is just the 5days. but. i'll do my best to focus on the class. and i'll try to preview and review everyday. i didnt do that from now. i just study only the class time. someday.. i'll wanna be a good speaker as like a native. ^^

강사 첨삭

[이름], you are a wonderful writer but you have to be careful with the capitalization of letters especially in the beginning of your sentences.   today is the fifth class. >>Today is the fifth class nowadays i'm so happy because i can feel a improving my english skill. >>Nowadays, I am so happy because I notice the improvements with my English skills.  if it is not much. >>It is not much.  but anyway i can feel it. >>Anyway, I can notice it.  so it makes me so happy! >>That's makes me so happy! before this class, i do hesitate to speak to someone. >>Before this class, I hesitated speaking to someone.  i'm so appreciate my teacher "Faye" ^^. >>I really appreciate you, Teacher Faye. now is just the 5days. but. i'll do my best to focus on the class. >>It has only been 5 days today, but I will do my best to focus in the class and i'll try to preview and review everyday. >>I'll try to preview and review everyday.  i didnt do that from now. >>I didn't do that until now. i just study only the class time. >>I only study during the class time. someday.. i'll wanna be a good speaker as like a native. ^^ >>Someday, I want to be a good speaker just like a native speaker.

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