5th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[ESSAY]
Describe a typical weekend in your life. What do you usually do and with whom?
A: I usally took a rest on weekend, Watching the movie with my wife in livingroom or I go to walk around a park near to house
It\'s makes feel me be comfortable and happy.
Essay Question by book
Answer the following in full sentences.
Which greeting kind of annoys you?
A: I annoy that someone asks a golf score when I didn\'t play golf well.
They want to check my condition for last game result but It\'s seems to tease me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ho!
Good job sharing how you spend your weekends! I like that you included both relaxing at home and going outside. Remember to use \'usually\' and \'makes me feel\' for correct grammar. Next time, you could add a specific movie you watch or something you enjoy seeing in the park to make your paragraph even more interesting.
~Teacher Polly
>>I usually rest on weekends, watching movies with my wife in the living room, or I go for a walk in a park near our house.
It\'s makes feel me be comfortable and happy.
It\'s makes feel me be comfortable and happy.
>>It makes me feel comfortable and happy.
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I like that you shared both why people ask and how it makes you feel. Next time, you could add how you usually respond to these questions to make your paragraph even more complete. Keep up the good work!
~Teacher Polly
I annoy that someone asks a golf score when I didn\'t play golf well.
>>I get annoyed when someone asks for my golf score when I didn’t play well.
They want to check my condition for last game result but It\'s seems to tease me.
They want to check my condition for last game result but It\'s seems to tease me.
>>They want to check how I did in the last game, but it seems like they are teasing me.
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