5th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I loathe bugs and are scared of them.
I used to write this sentence, but it tickles.
Bugs, worms, blood, ghost, another are many things to fear.
Insects suck, creepy, scary and scary.
I can't catch mosquitoes either.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elaine!
Thank you for your composition today.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
I\'ll see you in class!
Take care!
~~ Teacher Sharon^^
I loathe bugs and are scared of them.
>> Correct
Bugs, worms, blood, ghost, another are many things to fear.
>> I\'m afraid of bugs, worms, ghosts and many other things.
Insects suck, creepy, scary and scary.
>> Insects are also scary for me.
I can\'t catch mosquitoes either.
>> I can\'t stand mosquitoes either.
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