5th homework
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HOMEWORK:
5th homework
YOUR ANSWER:
I usually go to karaoke bar to hang out
with my friends.
There are good to sing while drinking.
And we dance, too.
Sometimes, I feel I need a break, I usually go to comic book cafe with my
sister.
There are many comic books. If you paid a small sum, you can read every
comic books for free.
In addition, it sells food and drink.
So there are good to take a rest and eat something.
.
.
CORRECTIONS:
I usually go to karaoke bar to hang out
with my friends.
It is good to sing in a karaoke bar while drinking.
And we dance there, too.
Sometimes, I feel I need a break. I usually go to comic book cafe with my sister.
There are many comic books in the cafe. If you paid a small sum, you can read every comic book for free.
In addition, it sells foods and drinks.
So it is a good place to take a rest and to eat something.
.
.
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---------T. Alexia----------
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