5th homework

2019-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

학생이 쓴 원문

I usually go to karaoke bar to hang out with my friends. There are good to sing while drinking. And we dance, too. Sometimes, I feel I need a break, I usually go to comic book cafe with my sister. There are many comic books. If you paid a small sum, you can read every comic books for free. In addition, it sells food and drink. So there are good to take a rest and eat something.

강사 첨삭

  

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

5th homework

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I usually go to karaoke bar to hang out with my friends.
There are good to sing while drinking.
And we dance, too.
Sometimes, I feel I need a break, I usually go to comic book cafe with my sister.
There are many comic books. If you paid a small sum, you can read every comic books for free.
In addition, it sells food and drink.
So there are good to take a rest and eat something.

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CORRECTIONS: 

 

I usually go to karaoke bar to hang out with my friends.
It is good to sing in a karaoke bar while drinking.
And we
dance there, too.
Sometimes, I feel I need a break
. I usually go to comic book cafe with my sister.
There are many comic books
in the cafe. If you paid a small sum, you can read every comic book for free.
In addition, it sells
foods and drinks.
So it is a good place to take a rest and to eat something.

 

 

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** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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