6/01 homework

2014-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I'd like to recommend as a child learn english. The children are quick learners. Also they can have good pronunciation. My niece's accent is pretty good better than me. Now english is spoken all over world so we have to learn english. To know the world, english is essencial.

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Hi there Ms. [이름]! Thank you for expressing your opinion about this. Anyway,  I was able to understand your point easily. Have a good day! See you later! ~T. Jessie~ I\'d like to recommend as a child learn english. >> I\'d like to recommend  a child to learn English. The children are quick learners. >> Children are quick learners.Also they can have good pronunciation. >> They can also have good pronunciation.My niece\'s accent is pretty good better than me. >> My niece\'s accent is  better than me. Now english is spoken all over world so we have to learn english. >> Now English is spoken all over the world so we have to learn it.To know the world, english is essencial. >> To know the world, English is essential.

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