6/09 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
I am very happy to read your answers but it should have been better for you to express it in paragraph form.
But that\'s okay.
You were able to incorporate humor to your answer. Great job!
I hope that your wishes will come true. ^^,
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
If I have a magic wand...
>> Correct!
OR>> If I have a magic wand I want my family to be in good condition.
1. My family keep body in good condition.
>> I want my family to be in good condition.
2. My husband and I want die at the same time in the future.
>> I want my husband and I to die at the same time in the future.
Because I can\'t live without him.
>> Correct!
Doesn\'t he like it? ^^
>> Correct!
I don\'t care...
>> Correct!
3. I wish to live in affluence more than now.
>> I wish to live in greater affluence.
Who doesn\'t like money? ^^
>> Correct!
When I get older I want to live without money troubles.
>> Correct!
If I will become rich man I many things want to do.
>> If I will become a rich man, I want to do many things.
I am willing to offer help to others.
>> Correct!
AND in relative pronun...
>> AND in relative pronoun...
I understood about your explain.
>> I understood your explanation.
You said if complete sentence after pronun we can omit the relative pronun and if not complete sentence after pronun we can\'t omit it.
>> You said if it is a complete sentence after the pronoun, we can omit the relative pronoun and if it is not a complete sentence after the pronoun, then we can\'t omit it.
>> I mean if it has a complete thought and if the sentence is grammatically complete (as a whole), then we could omit the relative pronoun. But if it is grammatically incomplete and it doesn\'t have a meaning, then we should not omit the relative pronoun.
Is it right?
>> Correct!
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