6.1 Homework

2015-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good afternoon! Can you tell me about something you would happily do again? I went camping to Soonchun in Korea with my family last summer vacation. There were so many trees and flowers everywhere. We grilled some meat and ate it with some beer. We tried to talk about our future stories. I would really happily do again, but we can't do that this year because my son is going to leave to New Zealand tomorrow morning. Maybe my son's trip will take about 8 months. I am afraid that I will be miss him a lot. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your first homework this week. Good job and keep it up. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon!>> Correct.Can you tell me about something you would happily do again? I went camping to Soonchun in Korea with my family last summer vacation >> I went camping in Soonchun, Korea with my family last summer vacation.There were so many trees and flowers everywhere. >> Correct. We grilled some meat and ate it with some beer. >> We grilled some meat and ate it with beer. We tried to talk about our future stories. >> We tried to talk about our future plans. I would really happily do again, but we can\'t do that this year because my son is going to leave to New Zealand tomorrow morning. >> I would really happily do it again, but we can\'t this year because my son is going to leave for New Zealand tomorrow morning. Maybe my son\'s trip will take about 8 months. >> Correct. I am afraid that I will be miss him a lot.>> I am afraid I will miss him very much.Thank you! >> Correct.

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