6.1 homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
What is the biggest advantage and disadvantage of Freedom of expression?
Everyone will has freedom of expression to advantage.
>> Everyone can have freedom of expression to an advantage.
Especially It is important to people of creative activity.
>> Correct
But sometimes it can give hurt to others.
>> But sometimes it can hurt others.
It is not freedom but violence.
>> Correct
or
>> It is not freedom anymore but violence.
Sometimes freedom of expression ca be a sword and hurt anyone.
>> Correct
For this reason I think Everyone will has to resposibilty for freedom of expression.
>> For this reason I think Everyone will have to be responsible for freedom of expression.
or
>>> For this reason, I think everyone has to be responsible for freedom of expression.
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