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Please write 1 of your philosophies in life and explain.
My philosophy in living my life is to be someone who is very human. I want to feel empathy for other people\'s pain because when I do, I will care about my neighbors. I also want to be a person who feels anger in absurdity, There are many times when we face illogical situations. I\'d like to be someone who feels anger in our society\'s absurdity. I will also be a person who isn\'t afraid of making a voice/ The reason is that when many people gather in solidarity anger, we can try to make a change in our society. A human person is someone who recognizes that every people is precious, and we all have the right to be respected. Thus, It is my philosophy in life.
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Hi [이름]. Awesome work. Keep it up.
- T. Gabby :)
My philosophy in living my life is to be someone who is very human. >> My philosophy in living my life is to be someone who is humane.
I want to feel empathy for other people\'s pain because when I do, I will care about my neighbors.
>> Correct.
I also want to be a person who feels anger in absurdity, There are many times when we face illogical situations.
>> There are a lot of illogical situations that we face and so I want to be the person who hates absurdity.
I\'d like to be someone who feels anger in our society\'s absurdity.
>> Correct.
I will also be a person who isn\'t afraid of making a voice.
>> I also want to be the person who speaks for what he believes in.
The reason is that when many people gather in solidarity anger, we can try to make a change in our society.
>> When people unite, we can try to change the society.
A human person is someone who recognizes that every people is precious, and we all have the right to be respected.
>> A humane person recognizes that every individual is precious and that we all have the right to be respected.
Thus, It is my philosophy in life.
>> Correct.
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