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Happy day, Lyn! Thank you so much for once again sending me your homework. You\'re answer made me remember my childhood. I appreciate what you have written here. Great job! See you! ~Teacher Elisha
Homework for the day: What\'s your favorite thing about life? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
=>This question makes me think a lot about myself.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This question makes me think about myself a lot.
Beautiful memories, thinks with my affection on them, and the precious people who arw now beside me are all i love most in my life.
>> Beautiful memories, things with my affection on them and the precious people who are now beside me is what I love the most about my life.
To be more specific, Those are memories that camping with my family when i was young, an album of my growth process, and a view of the sunset i saw through my window.
>> To be more specific, the things I love the most about my life were my memories when I went camping with my family when I was young, an album where you can see me growing and the view of the sunset I see through my window.
I hope that all this is permanent and that it will last long.
>> I hope that all of these are permanent and that they will last long.
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