6/11 homework

It's very difficult thing of the greatest problem facing teenagers today. In my opinion, most problem is wrong thinking of parents. Teenagers don't have a time of character building because of competition for entrance exam. Parents just give importance to entrance exam. Teenagers fall into egoism for extrem competition. I can do is just conversation with them. I wanted to tell them about my experience and wide world. Unfortunately, there's very little I can do now for them...

    Hello there! Thank you for expressing your opinion about this. I corrected your sentences but I\'m not quite sure if I got your ideas correctly. Anyway, have a good day! ~T. Jessie~ It\'s very difficult thing of the greatest problem facing teenagers today. >> Do you mean: It\'s very difficult for teenagers to face their greatest problem today.In my opinion, most problem is wrong thinking of parents. >> In my opinion, the greatest problem is the wrong thinking of parents.Teenagers don\'t have a time of character building because of competition for entrance exam. >> Teenagers don\'t have time for character building because of the competition for entrance exam.Parents just give importance to entrance exam. >> Correct!Teenagers fall into egoism for extrem competition. >> Teenagers fall into egoism because of extreme competition.I can do is just conversation with them. >> What I can do is just to have a conversation with them.I wanted to tell them about my experience and wide world. >> I wanted to tell them about my experiences and the wide world.Unfortunately, there\'s very little I can do now for them... >> Unfortunately, there are very little things that I can do  for them now.