6/11 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I hope you had a delectable lunch!
By the way, thanks for this! See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[famous person I admire]
I respect a famous women scientist, Marie Curie.
>>> I respect the famous female scientist, Marie Curie.
Marie Curie was a chemical scientist, and she found first radioactive material, radium.
>>> Marie Curie was a chemical scientist, and she\'s the first person to find the radioactive chemical element, radium.
Now, we know that the radioactive material is dangerous so much.
>>> Now, we know that the radioactive element is very dangerous.
However, when she found it, anyone didn\'t know that.
>>> When she first found it, no one knew about that.
She was first women scientist got Novel prize, and she got it second times.
>>> She is the first female scientist who got the Nobel prize and she received it twice.
When I went Poland, I visited the museum of Marie Curie.
>>> When I went to Poland, I visited the museum devoted to the life and work of Marie Curie.
And, I impressed so much about her passion and performance.
>>> And I was impressed so much about her passion and performance.
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