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2018-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[famous person I admire] I respect a famous women scientist, Marie Curie. Marie Curie was a chemical scientist, and she found first radioactive material, radium. Now, we know that the radioactive material is dangerous so much. However, when she found it, anyone didn't know that. She was first women scientist got Novel prize, and she got it second times. When I went Poland, I visited the museum of Marie Curie. And, I impressed so much about her passion and performance.

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[famous person I admire]

I respect a famous women scientist, Marie Curie.

>>> I respect the famous female scientist, Marie Curie.
 Marie Curie was a chemical scientist, and she found first radioactive material, radium.

>>> Marie Curie was a chemical scientist, and she\'s the first person to find the radioactive chemical element, radium.
 Now, we know that the radioactive material is dangerous so much. 

>>> Now, we know that the radioactive element is very dangerous.
 However, when she found it, anyone didn\'t know that. 

>>> When she first found it, no one knew about that.
 She was first women scientist got Novel prize, and she got it second times.

>>> She is the first female scientist who got the Nobel prize and she received it twice.
 When I went Poland, I visited the museum of Marie Curie.

>>> When I went to Poland, I visited the museum devoted to the life and work of Marie Curie.
 And, I impressed so much about her passion and performance.

>>> And I was impressed so much about her passion and performance.

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