6.11 homework

2019-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I woke up late, so i indeed had to hurry to get to work. However, traffic was out of control this morning. 2. You should study harder, if you want to ace the English Test. Most of all, it is important not to lose interest. 3. Flowers are common gifts at special occasions. Among them, Roses in red color show an intensity and are symbol of love. It is good look with babies\' breath. 4. This coat costs a mint, but i really like the design. Nothing really beats this design. 5. I was on the same team as her in this game. She played a large part in our team. +I can see many people who rooting for the team they like and \"they would meet them there but they show us korean\'s only unity.\" You said that you can\'t understand the last sentence \"\" I added some pic which can help you understand. People in the eatery don’t know each other and they meet there at first each other. However, they cheer for the team together they like or Korea for the triumph. So i think it will be an unity of Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. I woke up late, so i indeed had to hurry to get to work. However, traffic was out of control this morning.

>> I woke up late so I needed to hurry to get to work. However, the traffic was out of control this morning.

2. You should study harder, if you want to ace the English Test. Most of all, it is important not to lose interest.

>> correct

3. Flowers are common gifts at special occasions. Among them, Roses in red color show an intensity and are symbol of love. It is good look with babies\' breath.

>> Flowers are common gifts at special occasions. Among them, roses in red color symbolises intensity and love. It looks good with babies\' breath.

4. This coat costs a mint, but i really like the design. Nothing really beats this design.

>> correct

5. I was on the same team as her in this game. She played a large part in our team.
>> correct

+I can see many people who rooting for the team they like and \"they would meet them there but they show us korean\'s only unity.\"
You said that you can\'t understand the last sentence \"\"

>> Thanks for sharing the visuals. I enjoyed them.^^

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