6.12 H.W !
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Lyn! Don\'t worry too much about what the future holds, I am sure you\'ll have a bright one because of your beautiful personality. Whoever your future spouse is going to be, he is going to be lucky. You did great here! See you! ~Teacher Elisha
Homework for the day: Where do you see yourself when you are 70 years old? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
=> Actually, i\'ve naver been think about my old-age.
>> Actually, I have never thought about getting old.
The reason for the future is uncertain even after five years or ten years.
>> It\'s because the future is uncertain, it can change even after just five or ten years.
If i\'ll live around untill 70 years old, i\'d like to live with the more worry and anxiety than now like my mother and grandmother.
>> If I live until I\'m 70, I\'d like to live with more worries and anxieties than now just like what my mother and grandmother is feeling.
As like worry about their children etc..
>> Like worrying about their children and many more.
I don\'t know whether my current boyfriend will become a spouse :)
>> I don\'t know whether my current boyfriend will become my spouse.
but i want to spend my old-age with my spouse in a small and quiet village away from a big city in Korea.
>> But I want to spend my old age with my spouse in a small and quiet village away from the big and noisy cities in Korea.
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