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I think when men and women are angery they act diffrertly.
Almost of man raise his voice and some bad man is using force.
When a women get angry they don't talk any more. Some women is crying.
But it can be changed each other.
I am a multiful sometimes I use a force to my husband^^.
How about your reaction?
Nowdays I am disappoint by myself.
I study english 2 or 3 hours evryday but I forget almost of them.
I can use just a short sentence because my grammer skils is too lacking.
I am going to have to try harder...
Let's keep going~~~
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thank you for sharing this to me.
Anyway, in my case, I also react differently depending on the situation and the person concerned. ^^,
Well, Ms. [이름], learning a language will take some time.
We don\'t learn English over night.
We have to use it always so that we can be better.
The fastest way for you to improve is by practicing.
Speak, speak and speak English. I know that you can be better. Cheer up!
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
I think when men and women are angery they act diffrertly.
>> I think when men and women are angry, they act differently.Almost of man raise his voice and some bad man is using force.
>> Most men raise their voices and some bad men are using force.When a women get angry they don\'t talk any more.
>> When women get angry, they don\'t talk anymore.
Some women is crying.
>> Some women are crying.But it can be changed each other.
>> Do you mean: But it can be changed depending on the situation.I am a multiful sometimes I use a force to my husband^^.
>> Do you mean: I react in different ways. Sometimes, I use force with my husband.How about your reaction?>> Correct!
OR>> How about you?Nowdays I am disappoint by myself.
>> Nowadays, I am disappointed with myself.I study english 2 or 3 hours evryday but I forget almost of them.
>> I study English for 2 or 3 hours everyday but I forget most of them.I can use just a short sentence because my grammer skils is too lacking.
>> I can only make short sentences because my grammar skill is lacking.
I am going to have to try harder...
>> I have to try harder.Let\'s keep going~~~
>> Correct!
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