6.12 homework
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1. pay close attention to
2. household chores
3. multitask
4. wash cycle
5. signals
1. I wanted to learn to cook, so i took a class to that end. Every class i joined hard paying close attention.
>> I wanted to learn how to cook so I took a class to that end. I payed close attention to the every class I joined.
2. Household chores are also good exerxise. They are full-body workout because we have to move around whenever we do housework.
>> Doing household chores is considered a good exercise. They are full-body workout because we have to move around whenever we do housework.
3. This position requires a person who can multitask effectively. This department is stiff competition now.
>> This position requires a person who can multitask effectively. There is stiff competition in this department now.
4. The wash cycle takes about 30 minutes, so i\'ll wipe the floor during that time.
>> or: The wash cycle takes about 30 minutes so I\'ll wipe the floor in the meantime.
5. The siren was a signal for everyone to leave this building. I went out with a bunch of people in a hurry.
>> correct
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