6.12 homework

2019-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. pay close attention to 2. household chores 3. multitask 4. wash cycle 5. signals 1. I wanted to learn to cook, so i took a class to that end. Every class i joined hard paying close attention. 2. Household chores are also good exerxise. They are full-body workout because we have to move around whenever we do housework. 3. This position requires a person who can multitask effectively. This department is stiff competition now. 4. The wash cycle takes about 30 minutes, so i\'ll wipe the floor during that time. 5. The siren was a signal for everyone to leave this building. I went out with a bunch of people in a hurry.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.     


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. pay close attention to

2. household chores

3. multitask

4. wash cycle 

5. signals 


1. I wanted to learn to cook, so i took a class to that end. Every class i joined hard paying close attention.

>>  I wanted to learn how to cook so I took a class to that end. I payed close attention to the every class I joined.


2. Household chores are also good exerxise. They are full-body workout because we have to move around whenever we do housework.

>> Doing household chores is considered a good exercise. They are full-body workout because we have to move around whenever we do housework.


3. This position requires a person who can multitask effectively. This department is stiff competition now.

>> This position requires a person who can multitask effectively. There is stiff competition in this department now.


4. The wash cycle takes about 30 minutes, so i\'ll wipe the floor during that time.

>> or: The wash cycle takes about 30 minutes so I\'ll wipe the floor in the meantime.


5. The siren was a signal for everyone to leave this building. I went out with a bunch of people in a hurry.

>> correct

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