6.13 H.W !

Hi there, Lyn! Great job in doing today\'s homework! I just had to combine some sentences together but aside from that, you did awesome. See you later! ~Teacher Elisha

Homework for the day: What\'s your favorite season and why?
=> When i was young, summer and winter were my favorite seasons.  Because of i could go to the sea and play swim in the middle of summer, also i could make a snowman even if i went out in front of my house in the middle of winter.

>> When I was young, summer and winter were my favorite seasons because I can go to the sea and swim in summer and I could make a snowman just in front of our house in winter.

OR:

>> When I was a child, summer and winter were my favorite seasons because I can go to the sea and swim in summer and I could make a snowman just in front of our house in winter.

So i liked it very much.

>> That\'s why I liked these seasons very much.
 But now, for reason of old age and lack of innocence of childhood, it give me feeling just so hot and cold.

>> But now, because I grew older and I lack the innocence of a child, it just gave me a feeling of being too hot and too cold.
 It change my favorite season to spring and fall.

>> My favorite seasons became spring and fall.
 The seasons may not be enthusiastic, but they have a warm and calm charm.

>>These seasons may not be full of enthusiasm, but they have a warm and calm charm to them.

OR:

>> These seasons may not be special, but they have a warm and calm charm to them.