6/13 homework
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In my opinion, we can put off fire using our clothes.
we can hit the fire to put off the fire through the clothes.
It\'s point to be carefully here is that you must avoid touch the fire.
Only when you are touch the fire using the clothes and you must touch that for a moment.
If you touch that long time or touching your hands without something.
You will be have serious skin burn.
Furthermore, the skin burn can be develop complications.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름] [이름]!
No water? No problem. You can try using dirt or sand to put out a fire that has died down. With a shovel, scoop dry sand or dirt into your pit to extinguish the fire. Stay safe!
- Kristine ^^
In my opinion, we can put off fire using our clothes.
>> In my opinion, we can put out a fire using our garments.
we can hit the fire to put off the fire through the clothes.
we can hit the fire to put off the fire through the clothes.
>> We can use clothes to extinguish the fire.
It\'s point to be carefully here is that you must avoid touch the fire.
It\'s point to be carefully here is that you must avoid touch the fire.
>> The most crucial thing to remember here is to avoid contacting with the fire.
Only when you are touch the fire using the clothes and you must touch that for a moment.
Only when you are touch the fire using the clothes and you must touch that for a moment.
>> Just for a brief moment when you put out the fire using your clothes.
If you touch that long time or touching your hands without something.
If you touch that long time or touching your hands without something.
>> If you touch it for a long period or if you touch it with your bare hands.
You will be have serious skin burn.
>> You will suffer from severe skin burn.
Furthermore, the skin burn can be develop complications.
Furthermore, the skin burn can be develop complications.
>> Furthermore, skin burns might lead to some complications.
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