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This is my first homework :) !! ---What are the regulations in Korea involving drunk driving? A large proportion of the populace enjoy drinkig in Korea. Some people drive themself after drinking, and such behavior causes many dangerous car accidents. The police measures driver's alcohol concentrations in the blood unawares. According to regulations of Blood Alcohol Concentration(BAC), a driver who exeed 0.05% BAC is punished. A driver who violates this regulation has to fine or is sent to jail. Also, he can get a driver's license suspension or revocation of license. and I feel that ten minutes is too short~~ I think fifteen minutes is better than ten minutes. I'm wondering how do you think about it.

Hello [이름]! I am very pelased to see your name in the composition board. Indeed, your first homework. And you did a good job. Your thoughts are organized. The way you presented your ideas are very clear. Two thumbs-up for you! Anyway, regarding your concern, I agree that a fifteen-minute class is a great idea. However, I cannot assure you that I would still be your teacher. So I suggest that you call the Korean managers regarding this matter. Thank you for your interest in studying English. Keep on learning and you will go a long way. See you! ~KeLLy~ This is my first homework :) !! >> Correct.---What are the regulations in Korea involving drunk driving?A large proportion of the populace enjoy drinkig in Korea. >> Correct.*** drinkingSome people drive themself after drinking, and such behavior causes many dangerous car accidents. >> Some people drive themselves after drinking, and such behavior causes many dangerous car accidents. >> Some people drive after drinking, and such behavior could lead to serious accidents.The police measures driver\'s alcohol concentrations in the blood unawares.>> The police officers measure a driver\'s alcohol concentration in the blood. According to regulations of Blood Alcohol Concentration(BAC), a driver who exeed 0.05% BAC is punished. >> According to the regulations of Blood Alcohol Concentration(BAC), a driver who exceeds 0.05% BAC is punished. A driver who violates this regulation has to fine or is sent to jail. >> Correct.Also, he can get a driver\'s license suspension or revocation of license. >> Correct.and I feel that ten minutes is too short~~ >> Correct.I think fifteen minutes is better than ten minutes. >> Correct.I\'m wondering how do you think about it. >> Correct.