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2013-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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For this reason, blistering zone occurs more quickly the heating and cooling than a fresh zone. Therefore, if infrared radiant energy is analyzed emitted from fresh and blistering zones using thermography camera, the location, shape and size of blistering zones showing on the surface of stone cultural heritage monument can be appeared as quantitative temperature distributions. After taking a picture, examining the naked eye, and performing the percussion method on blistering sample, thermographic images were acquired via the passive method using natural temperature difference with respect to the surroundings in this study. And then, to get clear thermographic images by maximizing relative temperature differences between fresh and blistering zones, the active method using an infrared halogen heater was carried out, and five thermographic images were saved according to the heating time by a thermal source and temperature rise at blistering sample.

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Hi there,     Happy Friday!!!Wow what a composition you made today. Its sounds so scientific. Your sentence costruction are correct I just added a few words to make it complete. Have a happy weekend. See you next week. ~T. Jane~   For this reason, blistering zone occurs more quickly the heating and cooling than a fresh zone. >> For this reason, blistering zone occurs more quickly when heating and cooling than a fresh zone. Therefore, if infrared radiant energy is analyzed emitted from fresh and blistering zones using thermography camera, the location, shape and size of blistering zones showing on the surface of stone cultural heritage monument can be appeared as quantitative temperature distributions. >>Therefore, if infrared radiant energy is analyzed and emitted from fresh and blistering zones using thermography camera, the location, shape and size of the blistering zones showing on the surface of the stone cultural heritage monument can appear as quantitative temperature distributions. After taking a picture, examining the naked eye, and performing the percussion method on blistering sample, thermographic images were acquired via the passive method using natural temperature difference with respect to the surroundings in this study. >> After taking a picture, examining with the naked eye, and performing the percussion method on blistering sample, thermographic images were acquired via the passive method using natural temperature difference with respect to the surroundings in this study. And then, to get clear thermographic images by maximizing relative temperature differences between fresh and blistering zones, the active method using an infrared halogen heater was carried out, and five thermographic images were saved according to the heating time by a thermal source and temperature rise at blistering sample. >>CORRECT

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